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Posted: June 11, 2009 04:08 am  | |||
      IRC Nickname: Sgtswordfish Group: Guest Posts: 1737 Member No.: 1758 Joined: March 9, 2009 Total Events Attended: 64    | in the mist of the night as silence surrounded me i felt oblidged to write my thoughts. as i looked closely they shaped a message scribbled between lines. thus was the birth of this poem.. wanted to place it somewhere for art but could not find the right forum. a favor to ask would be for this topic to be relocated if there is such a forum. the poem is set in a past-present tense in which the writer, male or female is writting to someone or something that has established a motive for change. with that in mind i want you guys to figure out the rest of the theme. p.s. its free verse. no restrictions applied =D [FONT=Impact][I] before i met you i ran thru life and i felt my reason was to be the best i could be but then i met you had my life changed now i can walk thru life knowing. even though there are no words to describe you're still my angel sent from above you brighten my day as i brighten yours you've changed my life in many ways although going back to me may seem hard memories are kept deep inside maybe someday dreams can come alive but until then you've changed my life --------------------  Goals 2011  | ||
Posted: June 11, 2009 04:12 am | |||
 IRC Nickname: Big_Al_002 Group: Guardian Posts: 1102 Member No.: 1777 Joined: March 21, 2009 Total Events Attended: 25 | v nice -------------------- Guardian from 4/20/09 to 8/4/09, then quit. Back, Trial Guardian 6/12/11.  Proud To Have A Winddancir Original | ||
Posted: June 11, 2009 10:13 am | |||
 IRC Nickname: rachellove Group: Council Posts: 6955 Member No.: 173 Joined: January 31, 2008 Total Events Attended: 305 | Sounds to me that someone driven by success got a surprise in meeting someone and soften (maybe even by a Godly touch), but somehow it got spoiled. This leaving them with a deep memory of the good and desire to have someone close to them. --------------------  Thank you Garrett and Dallar. “The day soldiers stop bringing you their problems is the day you have stopped leading them. They have either lost confidence that you can help them or concluded that you do not care. Either case is a failure of leadership.” ~~Colin Powell ~~  | ||
Posted: June 11, 2009 11:09 am | |||
 IRC Nickname: Hyperion Group: Ex-Member Posts: 1636 Member No.: 978 Joined: June 23, 2008 Total Events Attended: 141 | wow not bad at all. p.s. you spelt through wrong --------------------    Dragon boots:29 Whips:2 | ||
Posted: June 11, 2009 11:28 am | |||
 IRC Nickname: Group: Banned Posts: 2 Member No.: 1405 Joined: October 26, 2008 Total Events Attended: 0 |
Soso. 6/10. --------------------   | ||
Posted: June 11, 2009 04:48 pm | |||
| IRC Nickname: Sgtswordfish Group: Guest Posts: 1737 Member No.: 1758 Joined: March 9, 2009 Total Events Attended: 64 | lol. i'm gonna have to revise it. but yeah. when i wrote the poem i rated myself a 4. in all honesty it has no plot nor measure but just an odd occurrance of unexpected events. also i wanted to add mispelling and sentence breaks on the mid-way to show disruption. but that might make the poem messy.. thanks for the ratings. u rock =D -------------------- Goals 2011 | ||
Posted: June 12, 2009 12:50 am | |||
 IRC Nickname: txtawkin/kathy Group: Ex-Member Posts: 847 Member No.: 1604 Joined: December 31, 2008 Total Events Attended: 45 | I like it alot. It makes me think of someone I know. Even though my life isn't what I want it to be right now, it is better because of that person. Just thinking of him makes me smile and "brightens" my day. Very nice.  and ignore Sooth, he's a bit anal.  --------------------  | ||
Posted: June 12, 2009 01:21 am | |||
 IRC Nickname: Sithofwookie Group: Ex-Member Posts: 2842 Member No.: 815 Joined: June 11, 2008 Total Events Attended: 48 | Tbh, I hate poetry so I'm not going to rate it. --------------------  | ||
poem 06/10/2009: before i met you, tonight i wrote a poem. discuss and rate