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Posted: May 27, 2008 11:29 pm  | |||
    IRC Nickname: Group: Guests Posts: Member No.: 0 Joined: January 1, 1970 Total Events Attended: 1    | "My Number One Girl" She is strong but thinks she's weak When she cries i want to weep I never met this girl But i have feelings for her We talk alot got to know know more about the other She may say she has mistakes But my number one girl has no mistakes She is perfect in every way -------------------- | ||
Posted: May 28, 2008 08:13 am | |||
  IRC Nickname: Abs Group: Emeritus Posts: 2071 Member No.: 4 Joined: December 26, 2007 Total Events Attended: 97 | Hmm, You know, a bit of English Literature/Language can really spice this poem up. It really depends who you're targeting this too. If it's for a lover, and she's aged about 15, I think she'd be flattered kind of. But to get a real meaning out of the poem, a real theme and stuff, you need to put more of the 'English' Toolkit in. Such as a certain rhyme & rhythm, I cbf to analyse Poems anymore because I'm done with English, but more of the tools are fresh, like Alliteration, Assonance, Oxymoron, Symbols, Themes, metaphors, similes, all this stuff really makes a poem what it is =D. ~Abs --------------------  "I may not agree with what you say but I will defend to the death your right to say it." Wg Council & Secondary Leader - 21/10/07 to 24/12/08 Msn: [email protected] | ||
Posted: May 28, 2008 09:41 am | |||
 IRC Nickname: Mistah_Vince Group: Ex-Member Posts: 2235 Member No.: 233 Joined: February 14, 2008 Total Events Attended: 85 |
Those two sentences are kinda contradictory, don't you think? :S --------------------   | ||
Posted: May 28, 2008 11:51 am | |||
| IRC Nickname: Group: Guests Posts: Member No.: 0 Joined: January 1, 1970 Total Events Attended: 1 | wow great poem!! So.. Am I that number one girl? lol jk. But well done.. I really like it. <3  . Good to know you have a passion for something. -------------------- | ||
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