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Posted: January 26, 2009 10:35 am  | |
      IRC Nickname: Ubg Fcbruges Group: Emeritus Posts: 1209 Member No.: 1373 Joined: October 12, 2008 Total Events Attended: 64    | Hi, I study digital arts and entertainment and tomorrow (tuesday) I need to show my work. So please give me some critical feedback so I can change/modify some things which are necessary! Drawing 1: detail - lab  Drawing 2: the loft  Thanks, Ubg  edit: The exercise is to draw a loft that belongs to a specific person. Mine is a male and 72 years old  --------------------  Portfolio ~~ WG Emeritus - 20 November 2010 ~~ ~~ WG Higher Guardian - 10 November 2009 ~~ ~~ WG Emeritus - 2 July 2009 ~~ ~~ WG Higher Guardian - 27 February 2009 ~~ ~~ WG Guardian - 12 December 2008 ~~ ~~ WG Trial Guardian - 30 October 2008 ~~ |
Posted: January 26, 2009 01:49 pm | |
 IRC Nickname: Dnovelta Group: Emeritus Posts: 2750 Member No.: 130 Joined: January 20, 2008 Total Events Attended: 137 | One thing that jumps out is the little "study" area in the bottom right corner. There is a desk with a chair, but it's like it's after the cleaning supplies; mop and red bucket. If this guy is 72, and uses a cane (leaning against kitchen counter) he's probably going to want all that stuff close together so he doesn't have to walk as much. That area could also be an area where the guy works with metals or wood or something. In that case it's a better fit there. I would still have all the cleaning stuff in a closet or something. Possibly near the kitchen also. Move the filing cabinet, it's between the counter and the couch? A 72 year old man is going to wiggle his way through there to get his papers? I think not. Move the bedroom closer to everything, and make it stand out. I say think like an old person. You want the things you use everyday close to each other so it doesn't take as much effort from you to do what you want to do. --------------------   |
Posted: January 26, 2009 02:28 pm | |
| IRC Nickname: Ubg Fcbruges Group: Emeritus Posts: 1209 Member No.: 1373 Joined: October 12, 2008 Total Events Attended: 64 | Thanks colonel, I'll see what I can change, however it's not easy to change it in photoshop  The 72 year old guy isn't that bad in shape though. Nevertheless he uses a cane indeed. -------------------- Portfolio~~ WG Emeritus - 20 November 2010 ~~ ~~ WG Higher Guardian - 10 November 2009 ~~ ~~ WG Emeritus - 2 July 2009 ~~ ~~ WG Higher Guardian - 27 February 2009 ~~ ~~ WG Guardian - 12 December 2008 ~~ ~~ WG Trial Guardian - 30 October 2008 ~~ |
Posted: January 27, 2009 12:20 am | |
| IRC Nickname: Mangomaniac2 Group: Emeritus Posts: 536 Member No.: 70 Joined: December 31, 2007 Total Events Attended: 63 | I'm never very good with things like this, but this is what sticks out to me. In the first picture, on the left side, the box, to the bottom left of the fishtank, looks like its casting a huge shadow (what comes off of the normal shadow). The box is small though, and I don't think it'd make such a big shadow. Also, in general, I think that old people are a bit neater than younger people. Maybe its just that they have more free time around the house, or that they're home more often, but I'm not sure how many 72 year olds leave clothes on their beds, don't make their beds, and leave random things on the kitchen counter, table, desk, etc. Of course, if you think these two things are completely off base, you don't have to change a thing. Overall, it looks great  --------------------  |
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