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Poem - Anne de Seine

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Josheh:

I think it sounded nice in Vio's format. Genes yours read like I actually expected it to read when I clicked, did not enjoy.

Mami Tomoei:

Im asian so im allowed haikus

I like Big Train Trains
Trains Trains Trains Trains Trains Trains Trains
Hot girl Drop pants pls?

His Lordship:

Vio's was great, but after reading it I had no idea that some girl had committed suicide by drowning herself.
It does need a bit more clarity.

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